The animation itself isn't that bad. There is room for improvement, but I feel you have the talent to get better. However, it is very short and offers no entertainment value. A story, joke, or plot of any kind would have been welcome. So, although I don't believe this should be on Newgrounds, I do believe you have what it takes to improve. Keep at it.
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